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http://kasakk.blogspot.com

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Please give your honest opinion about my site.It may be negetive story,I will appreciate you if you mark any points where I can make correction.Before posting this I have read all the rules here,I am glad to here negetive points about my site.It will improve my site weakness.Thanks and visit,I know time has own direction to move on but I can hope everyone would have some little time for me.

Dear Manas

I saw into your site, and you have nice site, in your site your give information to visitor about how to make money online and we know in online business there are some program that give us change to make money online i wold like criticize your blog first if you want to make money on line don't use free domain and hosting for your safety cause i experienced used free host but banned by blogger. secondly put your adsense in strategic place than visitor will click ads.thirdly you have many widget i think that widget inefficiency better you throw them into circle bin.

topsexy4 wrote:

Dear Manas

I saw into your site, and you have nice site, in your site your give information to visitor about how to make money online and we know in online business there are some program that give us change to make money online i wold like criticize your blog first if you want to make money on line don't use free domain and hosting for your safety cause i experienced used free host but banned by blogger. secondly put your adsense in strategic place than visitor will click ads.thirdly you have many widget i think that widget inefficiency better you throw them into circle bin.

Thanks topsexy4.May I ask for this help what you have find in my blog.Thanks for your critisizm,I care what you have said.Please tell me where I should place the google adds and how?
Secondly I have plan to own paid domain but you know it really a costly and I have to earn some first.I will surely consider this after some time.
You have said that I have many widgets.But dear amongest wideget I have few about adds .Its a simple info base wideget.Thanks hope a reply from you soon.

Hi
I went to your site - it looks packed with information ( and ads but I guess that's what its for as well ). I don't do technical reviews so just format stuff....so

OK, my main complaint is the spelling mistakes and odd English expressions  - under the insurance blog for example its not 'now a days' but "now days" if you wanted to continue using that expression, probably best not to use idioms if they aren't done properly. There are spelling mistakes on the LHS - business is spelt incorrectly. Some words are joined together that shouldn't be for example " at all " is two words.....I think English is your second/third language so if you have an English friend they may review your text and make suggestions. I know this seems I'm being picky but spelling mistakes take away the "professional" feel you are trying to create.....

Format wise its very well done if a little crowded - most blogs are busy and crowded so it fits the normal style. You have some interesting information and it should do well....

cheers
Kty

Hi  Manas,
                   I like your website  well set up easy to navigate and plenty of good information.
My biggest problem is the spelling .If you are directing  your blog etc at english speaking people then you must check and correct your spelling.  This is a major problem and  you wont hold peoples attention if you spell every second word wrong . You really need someone who understands the english language well to read and correct the errors for you . Other than that  i liked the website . Tho i admit i didnt stay on there very long.
Regards Jan.

Thanks dear.I know I am not wellin english but trying to learn more .I am blogging for last year,I have learnt some but its not enough.The spelling mistake is my lack of concentrations,perhaps pressing the wrong keys from keyboard.I know it could be correct.Anyway thanks for your review.I will try more to improve my english.Thanks.

Wow- is all I can say-my blog looks pathetic compared to yours-subscribed to it-so I learn something from you-I like the layout-theres really nothing to change on this-I think it looks great.

Hello Manas,

First congratulations on getting this far with English not being your first language. I wish i was able to create a blog or website in a second (or third) language as well as it.

The language barrier is however the main element which seriously needs addressing. The blog-site is obviously a site created to earn money through the amount of monetisation links and adverts on it.

For this to work effectively the spelling needs to be spot on and correct. It is all about credibility and keeping a visitor on the site as long as possible until they click one of the pay per click adds or otherwise make a purchase from one of the affiliate links.

It would be well worth the time and effort to get a friend or colleague to go over the site line by line and correct the lot in one go.

The colours and theme seem alright and are attractive enough. I would however ask you to consider the actual amount of monetising links and programs which your site displays!

Sometimes  "less = more"

Finally, (hope this all helps by the way) your site name url -kasakk.blogspot.com !

It would help if your url was related to the site content ie: "Generatefreetraffic.blogspot.com" or along the lines of "Generate-freetraffic.blogspot.com" if the first option was not available.

You may wish to consider this before going further on this particular blog -site but i would add the site is showing a Google PR of 2 showing it is obviously rated todate anyway with its existing url.

Regards ROCKY

Rocky wrote:

Hello Manas,

First congratulations on getting this far with English not being your first language. I wish i was able to create a blog or website in a second (or third) language as well as it.

The language barrier is however the main element which seriously needs addressing. The blog-site is obviously a site created to earn money through the amount of monetisation links and adverts on it.

For this to work effectively the spelling needs to be spot on and correct. It is all about credibility and keeping a visitor on the site as long as possible until they click one of the pay per click adds or otherwise make a purchase from one of the affiliate links.

It would be well worth the time and effort to get a friend or colleague to go over the site line by line and correct the lot in one go.

The colours and theme seem alright and are attractive enough. I would however ask you to consider the actual amount of monetising links and programs which your site displays!

Sometimes  "less = more"

Finally, (hope this all helps by the way) your site name url -kasakk.blogspot.com !

It would help if your url was related to the site content ie: "Generatefreetraffic.blogspot.com" or along the lines of "Generate-freetraffic.blogspot.com" if the first option was not available.

You may wish to consider this before going further on this particular blog -site but i would add the site is showing a Google PR of 2 showing it is obviously rated todate anyway with its existing url.

Regards ROCKY

Thanks rocky.I can change my blog url but it would hamper my present google rank,alexa rank and also technorati rank.As you know due this rank I can earn some money from some site.Anyway any details considerations which I should look on to,then please tell me.Thanks.

Viewing your website in Firefox 3 beta 5 has a lot of errors. A lot of things are breaking through their divs, and the website as a whole seems like a big ad with how small the area for the actual blog is.

You have 669 HTML errors on your site: http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http% … p;charset=(detect+automatically)&doctype=Inline&group=0

Also, you have sixteen CSS  validation errors: http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/vali … gspot.com/