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#1 2008-01-28 16:11:01

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Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com

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#2 2008-01-29 10:19:12

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Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com

Strictly an amatuers point of view here...
For me the pages are too cluttered. I dont like all the empty space at the bottom and sides . I think it would look a whole lot better if you  evened out the content on  the pages    . All the links work ok . The pages loaded for me ok. I like the idea of the site itself . Free anything  is always in demand lol. Ill leave all the technical stuff for those who know to advise you.
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#3 2008-01-31 16:05:43

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Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com

I like it for a stage I web site, I'm sure it's like fine wine, it'll get better etc. etc.

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#4 2008-01-31 16:25:00

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Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com

Well my first impression was that the site had no credibility or brand, and that its true purpose was to link out to other sites.


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#5 2008-01-31 16:50:52

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Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com

I agree with WS.

This site needs an identity, and something to offer the public in the ways of content.

It's ok if you're using for SEO for other sites, or clickbank money.... but a link here won't do much good. rel=nofollow

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#6 2008-02-06 11:31:36

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Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com

Agree with WS as well.  The site has no identity and if it were me, I would not be tempted for such a transaction/ receive help from you.

Also the main content area is narrow and it is cluttered with too much images and moving objects which distract the user from reading.


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#7 2008-02-08 01:39:12

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Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com

Hmm, where to start, maybe at the top
The highlighting a scrolling text mark this site as an amateur site - thus instantly no credibility in this world of credibilitiy must have.

Looking at the menu - everything from making money to poetry - again kills any cred

Down the middle - red bold big text - always a danger sign, plus the wording PLUS the picture of dollar bills - lucky not baseball or it would be STRIKE THREE

Right column - if you can present this toned down a litltle - to many flashing blinking banners.

Maybe think about ways of engaging with visitors, draw them in, feature some article links - its easier to to tempt than overwhelm blinka

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#8 2008-02-13 02:48:09

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Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com

sorry dude, bu ti think you should improve more to your site, it seems to be so weak in information and design - the construction of the main page is haotic

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#9 2008-03-05 17:24:37

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Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com

very cool, lots of eye catching movement

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#10 2008-03-05 21:38:40

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Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com

The colors aren't too bad and the general layout is acceptible.  The marquee has got to go.  The page is too long and what is your logo?  I would start there.  Also I am partial to a white background.


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#11 2008-04-28 07:04:03

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Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com

Your site is excellent! Very informative, kept me busy and interested.

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