#1 2008-01-28 16:11:01
- jfl7
- New member
- Registered: 2007-11-19
- Posts: 8
- I've been thanked 0 times.
-
Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
Website for Review
http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
Additional Comments
Any comments/suggestions will be greatly appreciated. Thanks so much.
Offline
#2 2008-01-29 10:19:12
- trpjan
- Member

- From: australia
- Registered: 2007-09-11
- Posts: 63
- I've been thanked 2 times.
-
Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
Strictly an amatuers point of view here...
For me the pages are too cluttered. I dont like all the empty space at the bottom and sides . I think it would look a whole lot better if you evened out the content on the pages . All the links work ok . The pages loaded for me ok. I like the idea of the site itself . Free anything is always in demand lol. Ill leave all the technical stuff for those who know to advise you.
Good luck. Jan.
Offline
#3 2008-01-31 16:05:43
- dotcomdiva
- New member

- From: Philadelphia, PA 19107
- Registered: 2007-12-18
- Posts: 6
- I've been thanked 0 times.
-
Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
I like it for a stage I web site, I'm sure it's like fine wine, it'll get better etc. etc.
Mia
Mia Hall Consulting, LLC
1-877-MIAS-WEB
http://www.miahallconsulting.com
http://www.jobfox.com/people/dotcomdiva
Offline
#4 2008-01-31 16:25:00
- waveshoppe
- Moderator

- From: Wave Shoppe
- Registered: 2005-06-10
- Posts: 1482
- I've been thanked 31 times.
-

Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
Well my first impression was that the site had no credibility or brand, and that its true purpose was to link out to other sites.
Hawaiian fabric - Low 2-yard minimum
Plus size Hawaiian shirts - Womens
Car shirts - Matched shirt pockets
Hawaiian dresses - Made in Hawaii
Offline
#5 2008-01-31 16:50:52
- MrStitch
- Member

- Registered: 2006-10-24
- Posts: 1072
- I've been thanked 11 times.
-

Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
I agree with WS.
This site needs an identity, and something to offer the public in the ways of content.
It's ok if you're using for SEO for other sites, or clickbank money.... but a link here won't do much good. rel=nofollow
Offline
#6 2008-02-06 11:31:36
- designsconcept
- Member

- From: Malta
- Registered: 2006-07-05
- Posts: 46
- I've been thanked 1 times.
-

Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
Agree with WS as well. The site has no identity and if it were me, I would not be tempted for such a transaction/ receive help from you.
Also the main content area is narrow and it is cluttered with too much images and moving objects which distract the user from reading.
Thanks for reviewing,
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
www.DesignsConcept.com | You Dream - We Amuse |
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Offline
#7 2008-02-08 01:39:12
- matte
- Administrator

- From: you know you want a caricature
- Registered: 2004-11-08
- Posts: 3275
- I've been thanked 28 times.
-

Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
Hmm, where to start, maybe at the top
The highlighting a scrolling text mark this site as an amateur site - thus instantly no credibility in this world of credibilitiy must have.
Looking at the menu - everything from making money to poetry - again kills any cred
Down the middle - red bold big text - always a danger sign, plus the wording PLUS the picture of dollar bills - lucky not baseball or it would be STRIKE THREE
Right column - if you can present this toned down a litltle - to many flashing blinking banners.
Maybe think about ways of engaging with visitors, draw them in, feature some article links - its easier to to tempt than overwhelm 
How to choose a web host
Get an amazing caricature
Support OBAMA? Get a cool Tshirt
Read my irreverent BLOG
Offline
#8 2008-02-13 02:48:09
- co13
- New member
- From: Europe
- Registered: 2008-02-13
- Posts: 4
- I've been thanked 0 times.
-
Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
sorry dude, bu ti think you should improve more to your site, it seems to be so weak in information and design - the construction of the main page is haotic
Offline
#9 2008-03-05 17:24:37
- teamheard
- New member
- Registered: 2008-03-05
- Posts: 5
- I've been thanked 0 times.
-
Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
very cool, lots of eye catching movement
Offline
#10 2008-03-05 21:38:40
- Timous
- Member
- From: California
- Registered: 2008-03-05
- Posts: 33
- I've been thanked 2 times.
-

Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
The colors aren't too bad and the general layout is acceptible. The marquee has got to go. The page is too long and what is your logo? I would start there. Also I am partial to a white background.
Web Design and Internet Marketing from Timous Design: http://www.timous.com
Offline
#11 2008-04-28 07:04:03
- MERCEDCHARLENE
- New member
- Registered: 2008-04-27
- Posts: 4
- I've been thanked 0 times.
-
Re: Please Review - http://www.CreativeBusinessLLC.com
Your site is excellent! Very informative, kept me busy and interested.
Offline
| Never |
- Sponsored Results
|
|