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Black King · 2008-01-21 19:17:37

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http://www.black-king.net

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It is a magazine, weekly update, that cover the rastafari international devopment, I do it with Microsoft Front Page. I take some risks with the design

special review [www.black-king.net/rastafari%20actuality.htm] can you watch the video?

Give thanks to one and all

Federico Calvo

Last edited by Black King (2008-01-29 14:41:58)

waveshoppe · 2008-01-21 20:53:25

Looks good to me. But I would get rid of the 8 outbound links on the bottom of your home page (they are of no benefit to you) and I would also go back over your images and make sure they all have some descriptive alt text, the fruit stand does not appear to have any.

Black King · 2008-01-22 08:24:42

Thank you very much, I do estimate your coment

laurie_m · 2008-01-26 17:51:08

Hey Black King! Are you out there, Mate?

Something has gone wrong with your site review request. There is no address for your site. Perhaps you edited it out yourself by mistake or else something else went wrong. Never seen this before. Dunno!

Better PM Nic and see what can be done. Also go to your profile and give yourself a signature link. If you intend to be a participating member, then give yourself an avatar. The more interest you show in SR, the more others will take an interest in you.

Best wishes,
Laurie.

Black King · 2008-01-29 08:39:58

Yes King Laurie, Now it´s done. Give thanks for your attention.

laurie_m · 2008-01-29 15:46:28

G'day Federico.

I can't speak for the moderators and admins but I would think that one of them will remove your links.

You see, what you have done, now, is against the forum rules. Suggest you read the forum rules.

It would be best, I think, if you PM Nic, the forum owner, and ask him to fix the problem with the link in your original request.

It's unlikely that regular forum members will bother with your review request while you are outside the forum rules, but again, I can't speak for others.

It's clear that you are a bit mixed up about using the forum, rather than trying to spam the forum.

I'm assuming that you made your original review request the proper way and then mistakenly edited out the link. Is this correct? If you were to try and to beat the system by designing your own review request, you may be banned, I would think.

Let's know if you need further help.

How did you go with the suggestions that WS made?

Regards,
Laurie.

ColoEagle · 2008-01-29 20:31:23

As you requested here are my comments on reviewing your website.

For a magazine type website and the use of FP in general you have done good. Fairly quick loading, consistent navigation throughout. tummenupp to giving me (the visitor) the option to download and view the videos and not have them automatically download.

Not a big fan of the black background. For a magazine site and this particular type of site I think it actually sets a mood of gloom. Not something I think you are wanting to do. Consider using brighter more inviting colors.

The text, though readable could use a little more contrast with the silver colored background image making it even easier to read.

The scrolling and flashing text is distracting when trying to read the content. Since this is an updates box, consider making it static in a box titled "Updates" or at the very least eliminate the flashing.

Similar issue with the hovering effect on the content links. Rather than have the text flash try giving it a different type of hover effect, ie-color change, remove the underline or change the background color.

With your site as it is pointed predominantly to a particular group of people, consider the following weighing it on your final objective for the website.
I like the fact that you have the site available in Spanish and English. Maybe make the links for the different language pages more prominent. I had to hunt before I found the link for the English version. Making a visitor have to hunt for information or for links is not good and will usually result in them leaving the website.

On the technical side of things, you have not declared a DocType. A DTD (DocType Definition) is beneficial to helping the browser display the pages the way you want them too, taking the guesswork away from the browser.

For a list of DTD's to select the correct one for your site - visit http://www.w3schools.com/tags/tag_doctype.asp

Having valid code is valuable to help insure your pages display properly in different browsers and also accessible to more people.
You have the following 21 code errors on the home page;

Code:

Result: 21 errors / 0 warnings



line 1 - Error: no document type declaration; implying "<!DOCTYPE HTML SYSTEM>"

line 11 column 22 - Error: "FPROLLOVERSTYLE" is not a member of a group specified for any attribute

line 11 column 22 - Error: required attribute "TYPE" not specified

line 17 column 16 - Error: there is no attribute "TOPMARGIN"

line 17 column 31 - Error: there is no attribute "LEFTMARGIN"

line 21 column 45 - Error: there is no attribute "BACKGROUND"

line 21 column 86 - Error: there is no attribute "HEIGHT"

line 21 column 108 - Error: there is no attribute "BORDERCOLORLIGHT"

line 21 column 134 - Error: there is no attribute "BORDERCOLORDARK"

line 21 column 156 - Error: there is no attribute "BORDERCOLOR"

line 26 column 62 - Error: there is no attribute "BACKGROUND"

line 153 column 24 - Error: there is no attribute "HEIGHT"

line 153 column 42 - Error: there is no attribute "SCROLLAMOUNT"

line 153 column 58 - Error: there is no attribute "SCROLLDELAY"

line 153 column 68 - Error: there is no attribute "STYLE"

line 153 column 182 - Error: there is no attribute "WIDTH"

line 153 column 187 - Error: element "MARQUEE" undefined

line 200 column 64 - Error: required attribute "ALT" not specified

line 500 column 118 - Error: end tag for "A" omitted, but its declaration does not permit this

line 499 column 32 - Info: start tag was here

line 503 column 184 - Error: an attribute specification must start with a name or name token

line 511 column 77 - Error: required attribute "ALT" not specified

dotcomdiva · 2008-01-31 16:01:43

Even though there is alot of content, I like it. It's well organized.

manas28 · 2008-02-29 13:40:32

Wow its a great site.Atfirst I was confused what are posted here.i cant understand your language dear for the first time.I was thinking about it is in engilish versions but understand later that it was not.I can say that you have some great site design.The way you have designed and placed your contents is great.Thanks dear and keep posting.

ambreen · 2008-04-30 07:13:28

a good site ,,but i think its a religious site,,,so a good work

larnell · 2008-05-16 04:03:49

HelloBLACK KING i thoght your site was well put together and organized it really stood out.I liked it alot keep up the good work BLACK KING. LARNELL@www.weightloss-dreaming.com. I consider us all of royalty continue your excellent KING...

oriango.user · 2008-05-30 15:39:30

looks nice enough, i'd maybe rethink the tabs bit a little, it just looks too large & a little, i don't quite know how to describe it, but it just doesn't feel quite right. also, ie7 at least, your layout gets broken while resizing the window.

SoraCross · 2008-05-30 19:04:26

Way too many boxes, and I dislike the multiple navigation bars. I think the design is way too busy, and dark. Need's a lot of work. It wasn't in English, so I don't quite know what the site was about, but if it's about a race or religion than it shouldn't look so aggressive, it should look peaceful, like digg or something.

DON · 2008-06-08 13:07:36

Hello Black King

I just to the a look at your site. I have to agree with the administrator about the colors on your front page. You do need to cheer it up a little. I opened one of the pages off your front page the logo on top of that page was just a blank bock with a little square. That I went to the bottom of the page clicked on magazine but when the page opened I got a big red page with squares and no pictures no content and no way to move to another page without going back. other than that the site looks pretty good. I can't tell you about content because I don't speak the language and I can read text.
I hope this helps you out.

DON

cloggie192 · 2008-06-30 13:17:44

Hi BK - Good looking site.

I thinks some of this has been covered earlier so excuse any repetition

The site is clean looking if not a little too boxy ( every thing is square) the black back gorund with the lighting flash - I would loose the lightning and lifgten up the background - however I do realise that it could be due to a black theme

Text in the boxes - could be bigger

Out going links serve no purpose at bottom - unless of course they are your sites and you are passing juice

your text " Do you speaks english? black-king.net also "

Should read " Do you speak English ? Click here for black-king.net "

Well done - good site

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