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#41 2008-06-23 01:44:12

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Re: Please Review - http://www.blueeyeswebservices.com

Hello,

I have had a good look at your website. It is very easy to navigate around, it has clean, crisp lines and very well presented.   I would like to talk to you about joint advertising if you would be interested?

Gilly

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#42 2008-06-30 07:07:11

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Re: Please Review - http://www.blueeyeswebservices.com

They say there is a market for everyone, but with the 1000's of web designers out there, why would someone pick your company? Companies want POW! and if you can't deliver it for yourself, you'll always limit who will buy your service.

Before you get too offended, my marketing firm has built web sites for over 10 years for small businesses to fortune 100 companies. So my perspective is tainted in that I have a very high standard for graphic design and the user experience.

Here are my suggestions:
clean up the sentences on your about us page. Find one thing that makes you better than others. What would your customers say is the reason they chose you over other vendors?

On your design page, let the user know they will be leaving the web site when they click on the links; add thumbnail images of the sites to the existing web page.

home page- change your title- get rid of 'welcome to". It just interferes with your SEO potential.

Best wishes!


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#43 2008-06-30 07:37:26

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Re: Please Review - http://www.blueeyeswebservices.com

Thank you Mr. Seowizard for your wonderful suggestions. 
At this time the only change that I will make is taking the link for templates out of the design area.  My design is done the way it is because at my age I have come to the conclusion (just in the past few months) that all those flashy seo optimized sites are for the young.  The people that I do business with would rather have sites that are easy to navigate and understand.  It is in no way a reflection on you, or am I being critical of you.  I do not intend to be so busy that I don't have time to "smell the roses" as the saying goes.  Sorry if it seems like I am venting at this point, because I have also have had it up to my ears with the google hoopla.  I personally do not trust any company that controls a search engine while it also controls paid advertising and seo.  That to me is kind of nepotism.
Thanks again.

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#44 2008-07-01 08:57:48

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Re: Please Review - http://www.blueeyeswebservices.com

Removed the link for templates and also figured out why you were telling me to remove welcome from title.  Thought I had changed that a while ago, it has been taken care of.

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#45 2008-07-02 17:36:52

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Re: Please Review - http://www.blueeyeswebservices.com

Hello Janina,

Nice little compact site.

I say that most landing page need to list the benefits people will get from using your services - in point form - so the brain can speed read it easier...I really like the points you have made though. For example...

- Packages to suit your needs, individuality and budget
- Easy-to-use tools are free with all hosting packages
- Convenient design packages will save you time
- Surprise bonus with every deal

I would love to see your design page with thumb-nailed images of the sites you've designed too.  Then hot-link the image, so that people have an idea of what they will find before they click.

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#46 2008-07-03 07:53:30

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Re: Please Review - http://www.blueeyeswebservices.com

Thanks E.....
Love your wording.  Will implement some of these ideas shortly.  Using only left hand right now, kind of dif... for a right handed person....
Can I implement your words in a short paragraph type.....

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#47 2008-07-03 08:01:26

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Re: Please Review - http://www.blueeyeswebservices.com

ninak wrote:

Love your wording...Can I implement your words in a short paragraph type.....

I just rewrote what you had already written...please use whatever works...with either hand!

You're doing great.

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