#1 2007-12-15 07:07:05
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Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
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http://www.adr.com.my
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Doing business onlline is essential these day. Please spend 2-3 minute to review my company website. Although it was not completed yet but comments and suggestion is much appreciated to help my business reach the target. 
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Rahim Aziz
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#2 2007-12-15 15:06:23
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
G'day Rahim.
Just a 2-3 minute review, Mate.
Your page is too wide. Four columns is too many.
Looks like you've started with a 770px wide template and just made it wider.
Design your site for a 1024px screen width. Make the page 970px wide or 1000px at the most. You'd be better off finding the right template in the first place.
Well, that's all you get for 2-3 minutes. A proper review takes conscientious members 20-30 minutes for a quick one. A couple of hours to do it thoroughly. 
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#3 2007-12-15 23:30:56
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
Hi laurie,
I am very happy to receive your reply. Yes, in the first place I also not agree with our web team members whereby the overall size was to wide but now I have to modify it and it may look fine now.
The reason why I put only require 2-3 minute for review because the website was in progress and a lot of section still not completed yet. But now laurie, I need to extend the review time to 30 minute since the content was more and more..kindly review my website again, laurie. i am very proud to receive your comment and suggestions. i really want to creat a website that really works..otherwise i have to break the bank...
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#4 2007-12-17 18:38:27
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
20 - 30 minutes that's more like it
. Course I will usually spend an hour plus. 
In general I like your colors and the general layout. 
Now for my comments/suggestions;
Have you looked at your site with FF. The counter and powered by statement with the blue background is in the middle of your content.
You have horizontal scroll in a 1024 width browser - not good.
The text size is on the small side, consider increasing it a couple of sizes.
A lot of content on the home page. Maybe break this down by at least half and lead me to the rest of your products.
Your "Welcome to our new site" statement should be the first thing a visitor sees.
1. What is your site about.
2. What does your site have to offer.
3. Why should I buy from you.
The light gray text on the white background is on the difficult side to read.
Clicking on an image should take me straight to that item and not to a page where I have to click again to view it. People are impatient and making us click too many times to view a product is aggravating. Aggravation will lead to closing the site and going on to the next site in our search.
When I click on a text link for a category such as your "Monitors" consider having images on the page I am taken to. One of a CRT and one of an LCD. This will add to the quality appearance of the page and also make it easier for a visitor to know which one they want to view first.
"ADR TECH EXPERT "
Two different colors of text and all run together is difficult to read. In addition it doesn't make sense. Are they for SEO or are these "Frequently Asked Questions" if so, make a separate page and give answers with suggestions. The word "more.." at the bottom. Is this suppose to be a link taking me somewhere? If for SEO then you need to make them more readable to a visitor. (Write for the human and not the robots) Humans reading something for robots will lead them to the next site.
I didn't see a "Privacy Policy" page or a "Terms of Service" page.
How / what will you do with my personal information.
What are your terms for returns or exchanges.
Lastly, on the technical side you have not declared a DTD (DocType Declaration) This is important to help the browser display your pages properly and not go into quirks mode.
You have the following code errors on the home page alone. Valid code helps to insure your pages are accessible to more people.
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Result: 146 errors / 20 warnings
line 3 - Error: no document type declaration; will parse without validation
line 44 column 606 - Error: document type does not allow element "BODY" here
line 61 column 19 - Error: "NOWRAP" is not a member of a group specified for any attribute
line 67 column 66 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "cmd_company"
line 67 column 66 - Error: general entity "cmd_company" not defined and no default entity
line 67 column 77 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_company" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 65 - Info: entity was defined here
line 67 column 82 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "cmd_partner"
line 67 column 82 - Error: general entity "cmd_partner" not defined and no default entity
line 67 column 93 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_partner" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 81 - Info: entity was defined here
line 67 column 98 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "lens"
line 67 column 98 - Error: general entity "lens" not defined and no default entity
line 67 column 102 - Error: reference to entity "lens" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 97 - Info: entity was defined here
line 67 column 108 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "nlens"
line 67 column 108 - Error: general entity "nlens" not defined and no default entity
line 67 column 113 - Error: reference to entity "nlens" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 107 - Info: entity was defined here
line 67 column 119 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "tlens"
line 67 column 119 - Error: general entity "tlens" not defined and no default entity
line 67 column 124 - Error: reference to entity "tlens" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 118 - Info: entity was defined here
line 67 column 132 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "cmd_header"
line 67 column 132 - Error: general entity "cmd_header" not defined and no default entity
line 67 column 142 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_header" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 131 - Info: entity was defined here
line 67 column 144 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "cmd_footer"
line 67 column 144 - Error: general entity "cmd_footer" not defined and no default entity
line 67 column 154 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_footer" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 143 - Info: entity was defined here
line 67 column 156 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "LANG"
line 67 column 156 - Error: general entity "LANG" not defined and no default entity
line 67 column 160 - Error: reference to entity "LANG" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 155 - Info: entity was defined here
line 67 column 162 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "cartoption"
line 67 column 162 - Error: general entity "cartoption" not defined and no default entity
line 67 column 172 - Error: reference to entity "cartoption" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 161 - Info: entity was defined here
line 67 column 175 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "category"
line 67 column 175 - Error: general entity "category" not defined and no default entity
line 67 column 183 - Error: reference to entity "category" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 174 - Info: entity was defined here
line 67 column 196 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "browsemode"
line 67 column 196 - Error: general entity "browsemode" not defined and no default entity
line 67 column 206 - Error: reference to entity "browsemode" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 195 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 82 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_company" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 65 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 98 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_partner" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 81 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 108 - Error: reference to entity "tlens" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 118 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 120 - Error: reference to entity "lens" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 97 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 122 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "clens"
line 68 column 122 - Error: general entity "clens" not defined and no default entity
line 68 column 127 - Error: reference to entity "clens" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 68 column 121 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 140 - Error: reference to entity "nlens" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 107 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 156 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_header" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 131 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 168 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_footer" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 143 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 174 - Error: reference to entity "LANG" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 155 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 176 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "cmd_refpg"
line 68 column 176 - Error: general entity "cmd_refpg" not defined and no default entity
line 68 column 185 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_refpg" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 68 column 175 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 219 - Error: reference to entity "cartoption" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 161 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 230 - Error: reference to entity "category" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 174 - Info: entity was defined here
line 68 column 253 - Error: reference to entity "browsemode" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 195 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 80 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_partner" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 81 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 89 - Error: reference to entity "lens" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 97 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 100 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "ncmd"
line 69 column 100 - Error: general entity "ncmd" not defined and no default entity
line 69 column 104 - Error: reference to entity "ncmd" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 69 column 99 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 107 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "AM_NEWUSERTYPE"
line 69 column 107 - Error: general entity "AM_NEWUSERTYPE" not defined and no default entity
line 69 column 121 - Error: reference to entity "AM_NEWUSERTYPE" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 69 column 106 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 135 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "AM_TOTALSTEP"
line 69 column 135 - Error: general entity "AM_TOTALSTEP" not defined and no default entity
line 69 column 147 - Error: reference to entity "AM_TOTALSTEP" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 69 column 134 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 161 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_company" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 65 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 176 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_header" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 131 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 188 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_footer" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 143 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 194 - Error: reference to entity "LANG" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 155 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 207 - Error: reference to entity "cartoption" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 161 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 220 - Error: reference to entity "browsemode" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 195 - Info: entity was defined here
line 69 column 231 - Error: reference to entity "category" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 174 - Info: entity was defined here
line 74 column 11 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "nbsp"
line 74 column 11 - Error: general entity "nbsp" not defined and no default entity
line 74 column 15 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 74 column 10 - Info: entity was defined here
line 82 column 64 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 74 column 10 - Info: entity was defined here
line 85 column 23 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 74 column 10 - Info: entity was defined here
line 113 column 4 - Error: invalid comment declaration: found name start character outside comment but inside comment declaration
line 102 - Info: comment declaration started here
line 131 column 41 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 131 column 132 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 131 column 213 - Error: end tag for element "A" which is not open
line 135 column 16 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 137 column 16 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 137 column 63 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 138 column 25 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 140 column 37 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 140 column 84 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 142 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 147 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 152 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 157 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 162 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 167 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 172 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 177 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 187 column 27 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 189 column 16 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 189 column 63 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 190 column 25 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 192 column 37 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 192 column 84 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 194 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 204 column 27 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 206 column 16 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 206 column 63 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 207 column 25 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 209 column 37 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 209 column 84 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 211 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 221 column 27 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 223 column 16 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 223 column 63 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 224 column 25 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 226 column 37 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 226 column 84 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 228 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 238 column 27 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 240 column 16 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 240 column 63 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 241 column 25 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 243 column 37 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 243 column 84 - Error: an attribute value specification must start with a literal or a name character
line 245 column 11 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 262 column 35 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 74 column 10 - Info: entity was defined here
line 267 column 16 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 267 column 28 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 303 column 75 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_partner" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 81 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 84 - Error: reference to entity "lens" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 97 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 98 - Error: reference to entity "ncmd" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 69 column 99 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 115 - Error: reference to entity "AM_NEWUSERTYPE" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 69 column 106 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 144 - Error: reference to entity "AM_TOTALSTEP" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 69 column 134 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 158 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_company" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 65 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 173 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_header" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 131 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 185 - Error: reference to entity "cmd_footer" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 143 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 191 - Error: reference to entity "LANG" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 155 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 203 - Error: reference to entity "browsemode" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 195 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 214 - Error: reference to entity "category" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 174 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 237 - Error: reference to entity "cartoption" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 67 column 161 - Info: entity was defined here
line 303 column 241 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "xps"
line 303 column 241 - Error: general entity "xps" not defined and no default entity
line 303 column 244 - Error: reference to entity "xps" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 303 column 240 - Info: entity was defined here
line 487 column 159 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 74 column 10 - Info: entity was defined here
line 516 column 45 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 74 column 10 - Info: entity was defined here
line 668 column 185 - Error: end tag for element "A" which is not open
line 668 column 189 - Error: end tag for element "A" which is not open
line 682 column 158 - Error: end tag for element "A" which is not open
line 714 column 16 - Error: an attribute value must be a literal unless it contains only name characters
line 748 column 8 - Error: end tag for element "TD" which is not open
line 749 column 6 - Error: end tag for element "TR" which is not open
line 767 column 4 - Error: invalid comment declaration: found name start character outside comment but inside comment declaration
line 756 - Info: comment declaration started here
line 776 column 99 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "amp"
line 776 column 99 - Error: general entity "amp" not defined and no default entity
line 776 column 102 - Error: reference to entity "amp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 98 - Info: entity was defined here
line 776 column 122 - Error: reference to entity "amp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 98 - Info: entity was defined here
line 776 column 142 - Error: reference to entity "amp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 98 - Info: entity was defined here
line 776 column 156 - Error: reference to entity "amp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 98 - Info: entity was defined here
line 776 column 171 - Error: reference to entity "amp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 98 - Info: entity was defined here
line 776 column 188 - Error: reference to entity "amp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 98 - Info: entity was defined here
line 776 column 204 - Error: reference to entity "amp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 98 - Info: entity was defined here
line 776 column 220 - Error: reference to entity "amp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 98 - Info: entity was defined here
line 776 column 230 - Error: reference to entity "amp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 98 - Info: entity was defined here
line 776 column 247 - Error: reference to entity "amp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 98 - Info: entity was defined here
line 776 column 272 - Error: reference to entity "amp" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 98 - Info: entity was defined here
line 776 column 316 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "copy"
line 776 column 316 - Error: general entity "copy" not defined and no default entity
line 776 column 320 - Error: reference to entity "copy" for which no system identifier could be generated
line 776 column 315 - Info: entity was defined here
line 796 column 6 - Error: end tag for element "HTML" which is not open
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#5 2007-12-19 19:48:17
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
Hi! Have to do some changes. Your site's a bit wide. There's some error with your template at the bottom. Best of luck!
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#6 2007-12-23 03:31:53
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
zoobie wrote:
Hi! Have to do some changes. Your site's a bit wide. There's some error with your template at the bottom. Best of luck!
Hi Zoobie,
Thanks for your reply. I have reduce the web size and it should be ok now. Kindly review again and to others I really need your input.
Regards,
Rahim Aziz
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#7 2007-12-24 13:53:31
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
Hi!
Hope not bothering...
I would suggest a unitary color palette (-scheme...) for your template's graphics.
For example, the vertical lines. I mean the delimiters between the columns. The left one is thin and blue, the right one is grey and pretty wide... (In fact, in Opera the right vertical line cannot be seen at all. I got used to OP 7.5x vs., perhaps in vs. 9 is OK...)
You still have that problem in FF rendering (NS, too...). Sort of bottom section overflow. It's typical for the dual (both table & div) HTML coding. I didn't put the page source into a code editor, I just guess this is the case...
I know..., you mentioned "Best view with IE 6 ..." down there, yet Mozilla Firefox is pretty popular...
Next: -proportions!
As usuall, the main section of the page, the central one gets the focus. So, a little wider middle column in the detriment of the right one would be better, I'd say... Consequently, the gallery's pics may be slightly enlarged, too.
Finally, (...got mad at me, allready?! ok..., pls skip, then...
) underlined content/ text is normally supposed, expected to be a link, a reference... So, you may use style attributes to emphasize the titles, (-"Privacy Policy", "Term and conditions", and so...) instead of underlining... In fact, you may set the titles as links, and open new (_self) windows with the respectiv content.
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#8 2007-12-28 18:37:49
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
Hello Rahim
Having just reviewed your website I would like to add my comments as a user myself but without detailed information on the specific code as I am pretty much learning as I go along myself. Firstly I would like to ask if you would consider increasing the size of the text as I find it quite hard to read although visually impaired the text at the present size might put others off too?
It is obviously a business venture and you place quite a bit of emphasis on displaying a lot of information complemented by images, but to me it seems quite a hectic home page I find it off putting to have the navigation list so close to the illustrations for the components, I feel that if possible a little more space between the component illustrations would help a little.
I would like to see the sponsor / affiliate logos moved away from the main body of text as I find them somewhat distracting, I understand the idea behind having them but would rather have them somewhere towards the lower part of the part. I would also recommend moving the TERM AND CONDITIONS to a separate page of its own as I find it a little ‘strong’ for your introduction page, like wise it does nothing to enhance your business to have REPAIR RETURN POLICY & WARRANTY information on a page that is essentially intended to promote your services.
Hope you find my comments helpful.
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#9 2008-01-11 12:13:44
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
Hi all,
A big thanks for all. A few cosmetic change have been made to our website and hopefully more good comments and suggestion. I'm very appreciate all concern and you all very great !.
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Rahim Aziz
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#10 2008-01-11 14:10:02
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
Nice color scheme but from a newbie myself you write like you talk and have someone proof the english and make some minor changes in delivery if you are trying to reach english speaking...
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#11 2008-01-11 15:00:43
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
Tried to review your www.adr.com site but IE7 cannot display it.
Maybe you are editing live?
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#12 2008-01-11 21:28:15
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
DayTradersWin wrote:
Tried to review your www.adr.com site but IE7 cannot display it.
Maybe you are editing live?
John
hi John,
Thanks a lot. I think you miss the actual url. Our website url is www.adr.com.my
Thanks
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#13 2008-01-11 21:40:45
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Re: Please Review - http://www.adr.com.my
perfectrubbermulch wrote:
Nice color scheme but from a newbie myself you write like you talk and have someone proof the english and make some minor changes in delivery if you are trying to reach english speaking...
Hi Queen,
Yes ur are right. We will double check the language. Thanks for reply. Your website also looks great. I like the background color.
Bye
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