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http://funds1.notlong.com
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Please give me your honest opinion, whether it hurts or not!
I think the site need to be aligned at center - needs testing in different monitors - good luck
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OK, you did say to be honest. 
I use FireFox as my browser and the pages are sitting to the left. Would look better centered.
I was confused about what the site is about and/or what it has to offer. After some scrolling I did figure it out.
Suggest you take the "Description" paragraph and move it to the top above the fold. This will tell visitors immediately what the site is about.
There is a lot of content on the home page and reminds me of those long single sales page sites. (something a lot of people will run from)
I suggest you remove everything below your box containing the 10 levels of your program. This content is all unrelated, adds to page load time and will take away from the appearance of a sales page site.
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It's a nice website. You've done a great job. However, I was a little confused at first as to what the site was all about. I would agree with moving the "description" to the top. When I go to the click on the items on the left side of the page, the blue goes away, and it's hard to read what I'm clicking on. I don't know if there's a way to change that or not. But, overall, it's a nice site with alot of detailed information. Good luck!
Why not change the header if that header is fundraiser 1.0. What about that logo at the upper left corner? It would look better if arranged well. Just my opinion.
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