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#1 2007-07-16 08:36:18

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Please Review - http://www.anitaswebdesign.com

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I'm new in this trade and gaining lots of experience.  I've updated my site 3 times within the last two years.  I've also received comments from two different sites; blogs.  I read the comments; positive and negative and redesigned my site.  I would really like it if you could review my site and post your thoughts; positive or negative.  At first I took the first batch personally but now I'm learning from comments!!  Thanks everyone.

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#2 2007-07-16 09:45:53

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Re: Please Review - http://www.anitaswebdesign.com

Hey Anita,

I use a widescreen monitor and your images do not lign up with the "book" backgrounds on mine

fixing that i a good start glad


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#3 2007-07-16 10:00:45

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Re: Please Review - http://www.anitaswebdesign.com

It's not just the wide screen.

Anita, you need to get the FireFox browser and look at your site. FireFox


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#4 2007-07-16 10:11:07

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Re: Please Review - http://www.anitaswebdesign.com

Anita - I agree with what Nic said, and I'll go further in-depth ... apparently, the Bloggers didn't give you much help from a lack of knowledge.

I'm assuming you created the site in MSIE -- MSIE has problems displaying sites properly; so you should always code your site for Firefox first.

That being said, you didn't start your site with the mandatory <!DOCTYPE Declaration> which is not only for validation, but also ensures your site displays properly in all browsers ... therefore, you have the following 122 code warnings that should be fixed...

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line 389 column 7 - Warning: missing </center>
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line 185 column 1 - Warning: <script> attribute "id" has invalid value "Sothink Widgets:_pgtres\39270.950775463_PageletServer.DynamicMenu.pgt"
line 252 column 1 - Warning: <img> lacks "alt" attribute
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line 263 column 11 - Warning: <table> proprietary attribute "height"
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#5 2007-07-16 10:19:58

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Re: Please Review - http://www.anitaswebdesign.com

Thanks everyone!  I'll check out your comments and get working on that.  I don't have a whole lot of time as I also have a home daycare, but I'll work on things asap. glad

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#6 2007-07-16 12:15:44

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Re: Please Review - http://www.anitaswebdesign.com

I suggest making your links a tad larger and a different color so they are a little bit more noticable. I like your idea of the site, although websites arent put on paper ( unless rought draft of course ) maybe instead of the book use like a computer interface. I had a web design company many moons ago and it was called universedesigns.com. I designed that like a space shuttle and everytime a link was clicked the chuttle would go into an orbit to a planet which brought into a page within that frame. Maybe do something catchy like
A NEED OF A NEW WEB DESIGN?  similar to your name..that was a 3 second thought but something like anita is very catchy to use. And start from there...
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#7 2007-07-16 12:22:22

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Re: Please Review - http://www.anitaswebdesign.com

Thanks Tim,  I had thought of a computer-like theme.  I wanted to try out the book, it's been in my head a while.  I may try the computer on a test site and see how it turns out.  Thanks for the ideas. glad

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#8 2007-07-16 12:41:06

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Re: Please Review - http://www.anitaswebdesign.com

My resolution is 1280x1024.  The presentation of your site is not good...  The tables and other images are not aligned properly inside the "book" picture and ive got 2 1/2 books in my screen...  Try to create a table and set the background image of that table instead of setting the book image as the page's background.

Try if that works

Also i noticed that you use few colours...  even in the other websites you created.  Try to put more colours in your site as it makes it more pleasant/interesting for the user to browse.  Try to use contrasting colours

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#9 2007-07-16 12:55:39

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Re: Please Review - http://www.anitaswebdesign.com

Thank you too designsconcept; I checked out your site too.  I like it.  I do think I'm going to redesign my site again.  It seems to be an appearance issue more than anything.

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