#1 2007-07-16 05:27:02
- kinderjazz
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Please Review - http://www.kinderjazz.com
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http://www.kinderjazz.com
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I run a Big Band for kids called KINDERJAZZ and would love to know why my conversion to sales for our CDs isn't happening.
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#2 2007-07-16 09:36:40
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Re: Please Review - http://www.kinderjazz.com
I don't believe anyone has an answer as to why you're not selling anything -- most likely the economy has something to do with it, or many haven't heard of you ... I certainly haven't heard of you.
Now, for the review....
You need to get rid of this -- <!-- GOLIATH12MX --> at the beginning of your code.
You have no meta tags, which is why the SE's will have a problem crawling / indexing your site.
You have CSS code in there twice -- delete the 2nd one -- and you did the site using Tables ... tables are for TABULAR DATA ... suggest you use Table-less CSS if you can.
Lastly, you have the following 86 code warnings that should be fixed...
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line 242 column 25 - Warning: missing </font> before <h1>
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#3 2007-07-16 12:09:43
- Brogansinc
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Re: Please Review - http://www.kinderjazz.com
My opinion is to move the free music info subscription to the bottom, that sorta scares some people away. Also you have a lot of verbage on that homepage. I am very new to this, but as a web crawler I do know that does turn me away from your site.
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