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designsconcept · 2007-07-10 11:35:55

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http://www.designsconcept.com

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Hi,

Please review when you have some time and give me any feedback/suggestions about this website.

Thank you

TA · 2007-07-10 12:08:47

Not a bad-looking site, so here's my review.........

1. Your meta description is way too long -- shorten that to a simple sentence "describing" your site content and remove the "Click here to find out more."

2. On your NavMenu, remove the "01" -- "02" etc ... it looks tacky, and why would anyone want to know how they're numbered?

3. Get rid of the "larger font" and "smaller font" -- you're the Designer / Owner -- you should make all of the text font a specific size.

4. You're using CSS and Tables -- tables are for TABULAR DATA -- it's best to do Table-less CSS.

5. You didn't start the site off with the mandatory <!DOCTYPE Declaration> which has brought forth the following 51 code warnings that should be fixed...

Code:

line 1 column 1 - Warning: missing <!DOCTYPE> declaration

line 6 column 81 - Warning: unescaped & which should be written as &amp;

line 26 column 76 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 26 column 81 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 27 column 86 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 27 column 91 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 31 column 79 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 31 column 84 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 32 column 74 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 32 column 79 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 33 column 74 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 33 column 79 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 34 column 79 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 34 column 84 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 38 column 88 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 38 column 93 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 39 column 78 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 39 column 83 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 40 column 77 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 40 column 82 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 41 column 73 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 41 column 78 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 42 column 82 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 42 column 87 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 46 column 76 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 46 column 81 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 47 column 72 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 47 column 77 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 51 column 75 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 51 column 80 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 55 column 78 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 55 column 83 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 56 column 79 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 56 column 84 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 57 column 84 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 57 column 89 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 72 column 183 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 193 column 3 - Warning: <body> attribute "," lacks value

line 222 column 31 - Warning: <table> unexpected or duplicate quote mark

line 280 column 4 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 280 column 11 - Warning: '<' + '/' + letter not allowed here

line 325 column 33 - Warning: <embed> is not approved by W3C

line 325 column 244 - Warning: discarding unexpected </embed>

line 193 column 3 - Warning: <body> proprietary attribute "topmargin"

line 195 column 13 - Warning: <script> inserting "type" attribute

line 216 column 25 - Warning: <table> proprietary attribute "background"

line 218 column 29 - Warning: <td> proprietary attribute "background"

line 221 column 29 - Warning: <td> proprietary attribute "background"

line 222 column 31 - Warning: <table> proprietary attribute "background"

line 249 column 7 - Warning: <script> inserting "type" attribute

line 334 column 33 - Warning: <div> anchor "div1" already defined

designsconcept · 2007-07-10 13:57:58

Thanks TA for replying.

Ive removed the numbers, shortened the meta tag description and added the <!Doctype..> tag. I will do the others later.

Thanks for you comments and feedback!

[url removed please add it to your signature under your profile]

Last edited by ColoEagle (2007-07-10 20:10:46)

TA · 2007-07-10 15:18:22

You're welcome -- by going the way of XHTML, you now have 86 code warnings ... the reason is you haven't coded all of your HTML syntax properly for the Doctype declaration, meaning at the end of your lines of HTML code, you need to put a space and backlash like this ...

With XHTML, it should be written like this ...
<link href="stylecss.css" type="text/css" rel="stylesheet" />

Currently, this line of code shows up like this --
<link href="stylecss.css" type="text/css" rel="stylesheet">

designsconcept · 2007-07-11 03:05:12

Thanks vmuch mate! I will fix those soon.

Anyone has other ideas? Come on write your review!

designsconcept · 2007-07-14 06:18:20

I would be really pleased if I get more feedback!

tonisz · 2007-07-14 17:46:06

Not bad at all! Your site looks great, I like the menus and the layout. Navigation is easy and the pages are loading pretty fast. You need more content though... [ URL edited out by TA ]. Good luck!

designsconcept · 2007-07-15 05:44:29

tonisz wrote:
Not bad at all! Your site looks great, I like the menus and the layout. Navigation is easy and the pages are loading pretty fast. You need more content though... [ URL edited out by TA ]. Good luck!

Thanks Tonisz!!

[what does "[ URL edited out by TA ]." mean??]

Last edited by designsconcept (2007-07-15 05:57:36)

TA · 2007-07-15 08:56:35

designsconcept wrote:
tonisz wrote:
Not bad at all! Your site looks great, I like the menus and the layout. Navigation is easy and the pages are loading pretty fast. You need more content though... [ URL edited out by TA ]. Good luck!
Thanks Tonisz!!

[what does "[ URL edited out by TA ]." mean??]

It means I deleted a link to a URL that was posted leading to one of his sites that are in his signature.

designsconcept · 2007-07-15 10:49:19

Ok TA. Thanks for replying

designsconcept · 2007-07-16 03:38:11

Anymore reviews? Come on.... I like both feedback / suggestions / complaints!

designsconcept · 2007-07-16 12:47:41

TA, earlier you told me about making Table-less CSS.

Can you tell me where can i find some help about this??

Thanks mate.

ColoEagle · 2007-07-16 13:20:37

I give you a tummenupp to your site.

A nice simple layout that works and looks good.

The best way to find info on going to a table-less design is to do a search. There are a lot of sites with information and templates out there.

If you are completely new to using CSS for layout and design you may want to review the w3c css school http://www.w3schools.com/css/

designsconcept · 2007-07-17 02:30:06

Hi ColoEagle!

Thanks for your review and comments. I will check the W3C review soon

designsconcept · 2007-07-20 07:48:11

First of all I would like to thank very much ColoEagle for the help he gave me.

Secondly, again, I would like to invite more participants of this forum to review my site. I am open to both constructive and destructive criticism so do not worry!!

Regards
Patrick

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