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tazman06 · 2007-06-22 18:32:25

Website for Review
http://www.tdseamlessenterprises.biz

Additional Comments
looking for some ideas on how the appearance of the site is. I would also like input on ease of use. All comments and suggestions are welcome

ColoEagle · 2007-06-22 19:43:24

In general I give you a tummenupp

Fairly quick load time, consistent navigation colors are good.

I do have a few comments / suggestions.

I found the large bold text on the home page a little difficult to read. The text size should be consistent across all pages. Change the home page to match the rest of the site.

The light gray text color, though readable could be darker, creating more contrast with the background making it even easier to read.

I was a little thrown off with a couple of your pages and link text.
The "About Our Store" link on the left. I expected to find a page telling me about your company, instead I was taken to the home page.

Your contact us page.
Expected to view a page with a form or information on how a visitor could "Contact You". The current page I would resave it as a FAQ page and create an actual contact us page with a either contact form, email address, and a telephone number.

I would suggest you take your css from each of the pages, place it on a separate page saved as .css and then call for it from the head section of each page. This would allow you to make a change to a single page and have it "cascade through the entire site.

You have also mixed your html coding by using basic html and xhtml. You should use and stick with one or the other but not both.

There are 61 code errors on the home page alone.
You have not declared a "DTD". A DocType Declaration will help to insure your site is viewable in all browser.

Here are the code errors from your home page;

Code:

Result: 61 errors / 1 warning



line 1 - Error: no document type declaration; will parse without validation

line 545 column 10 - Error: end tag for element "SCRIPT" which is not open

line 548 column 5 - Error: document type does not allow element "BODY" here

line 580 column 160 - Warning: cannot generate system identifier for general entity "nbsp"

line 580 column 160 - Error: general entity "nbsp" not defined and no default entity

line 580 column 164 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 590 column 171 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 590 column 177 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 590 column 184 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 590 column 190 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 590 column 277 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 590 column 283 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 590 column 290 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 590 column 296 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 601 column 105 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 601 column 112 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 601 column 198 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 601 column 205 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 601 column 302 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 601 column 309 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 601 column 397 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 601 column 404 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 634 column 125 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 634 column 164 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 634 column 665 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 634 column 690 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 634 column 1281 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 634 column 1821 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 634 column 2033 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 634 column 2074 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 634 column 2094 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 635 column 23 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 637 column 23 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 687 column 46 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 730 column 46 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 773 column 46 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 870 column 46 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 913 column 46 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 956 column 46 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 969 column 248 - Error: end tag for element "A" which is not open

line 1007 column 6 - Error: end tag for element "FORM" which is not open

line 1009 column 5 - Error: end tag for element "DIV" which is not open

line 1043 column 20 - Error: end tag for element "TD" which is not open

line 1044 column 10 - Error: end tag for element "TR" which is not open

line 1054 column 24 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 80 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 87 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 184 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 191 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 286 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 293 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 382 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 389 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 487 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 494 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 586 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1067 column 593 - Error: reference to entity "nbsp" for which no system identifier could be generated

line 580 column 159 - Info: entity was defined here

line 1075 column 11 - Error: end tag for element "TABLE" which is not open

line 1075 column 16 - Error: end tag for element "TD" which is not open

line 1076 column 6 - Error: end tag for element "TR" which is not open

line 1077 column 7 - Error: end tag for element "TABLE" which is not open

line 1079 column 6 - Error: end tag for element "HTML" which is not open

TA · 2007-06-22 21:10:31

"Seamless Enterprises"? smash

I thought I was about to enter a "Sewing Club" -- IMO, more thought should've gone into the selection of your domain name.

matte · 2007-06-22 22:25:13

I agree with Coloeagle on the font size - very hard to read.

You also need to look at rewriting your content on the home page fopr a start - make it customer focussed. An analysis shows:
Your Customer Focus Rate: 38.46%
You have 15 instances of customer-focused words.

Your Self Focus Rate: 61.54%
You have 22 instances of self-focused words.
You have 2 instances of the Company Name.

This is pretty poor. Express everythign in cusomer centric ways - never use 'we', 'our' etc

tazman06 · 2007-06-24 17:29:49

Thank you everyone for your comments. I will start to implament what i can to make some changes. They were all helpful hope to hear some more. bow

tazman06 · 2007-06-24 21:08:22

coloeagle
THank you for your input I have made some of your suggestions. The web site is designed by a third party and some info such as the "contact us page" is preset. I have contacted them to see if there is a way to change the page name or layout applause

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#1 2007-06-22 18:32:25

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